Saturday, June 4

.....*....."dreams of untold strangeness".....*.....

he looked her in the eye

"are you serious about this?" he asked.

"would i lie to you?" she retorted.

of course she wouldn't. she was his....and she didn't lie to him.

"then we've got to do something about this." he said.

"yes, master" she replied.

"don't give me sass" he said, eyeing her.

"sorry, your lordship" she said, smiling.

this beautiful smile broke the tension. he smiled as well.

"was i a little bossy? i'm sorry" he said, becoming serious again.

"a little. but i kind of like that side of you..." she said.

"hmm...didn't know that...learn something new every day, eh?" he said, staring into her deep eyes.

"if you're paying attention..." she said, smiling again.

"huh...." he said, obviously lost.

"umm...the situation?" she asked.

"oh! right....of course..." he said.

"what do you want me to do" she questioned.

"umm...could you run over there and tell them to please stop while i deal with this?" he replied.

"oh, okay. i didn't see them" she replied as she began running.

she was soon out of hearing range.

"and i love you..." he said, mornfully.

7 Comments:

Blogger Polenta said...

this is nothing. this is everything. in short, i have not lived this story/experience...at least in this dimension of reality. otherwise, i am not sure....

Sunday, June 05, 2005 10:15:00 PM  
Blogger Nature's Daughter said...

lol! it's awsome! i like it! because it seems to have no plot or point but it is still cool and it leaves you wondering what the heck is going on! sweetness!!!!

your joyful maiden of horses

Monday, June 06, 2005 6:27:00 PM  
Blogger Polenta said...

yes, this story will go on. you will hear more from these two. and also, another character will be introduced...and it will stir things up quite a bit!




















































and that is what she happened to say

Monday, June 06, 2005 8:17:00 PM  
Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

Aloha people!

this is great! you can really see and feel what's going on, and since it is kind of not specified in all aspects it's up to you to create in your mind's eye the setting, people etc. I must say you are one good writer. give me some tips!!
bbfn

by the way froggie and (ahem)grace are you the same people?

Tuesday, June 07, 2005 1:28:00 PM  
Blogger Polenta said...

yep!we are one in the same! thank you for the compliment! i have high asperacions (if that's how u spell it!) to become a writer!


















and that happens to be what she said

Tuesday, June 07, 2005 5:46:00 PM  
Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

i think it's aspirations....and you would make a great writer. Are you writing any books at present? I'm working on one, but i have been slacking off lately.






KK Rocks

Tuesday, June 07, 2005 6:57:00 PM  
Blogger Polenta said...

i am writing several books at the moment. they are mostly shorter but i have bigger intentions for lots of my works. i'm glad to hear that you are also writing. we need more books in this world!!!

Tuesday, June 07, 2005 9:16:00 PM  

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