Monday, January 16

to sin or love

she watched him turn
and turn he did
she saw him yourn
for things forbid

but did she stop him
from his dream?
did she try
to end his scheme?

no, she used endurence best
and showed him where his longing chest
could come, at end of day, to rest
beside her, both their souls undressed

"come try to be
controlled in love.
come right by me
and sin, my love"

could she have given
any less?
could he have lived in
saint's confess?

the answer, as I'm sure you know
can only be "resounding NO!"
for he could neither stay nor go
had he forsaken her virtue so!

"don't toy with our
transparent love.
come by the hour
and sin, my love"

no more could he
resist perfection
"I must own this key
to her affection"

he offered all
and gave her more
would this be her fall
or her chance to soar?

"we could drop
and lose our love.
but by me stop
and sin, my love"

12 Comments:

Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

holy wow.

Wednesday, January 18, 2006 7:26:00 PM  
Blogger Nature's Daughter said...

omg, this is so awesome!!! i love it!! i love it so much!

Wednesday, January 18, 2006 9:10:00 PM  
Blogger Ruthie said...

hi.


I like it.
very....soulful. and captivating.


and I noticed you like Shakespeare. I do too. but I like twelfth night.

oh and btw I have read Sabriel but pray tell is there a SEQUEL??!!! GIMMEGIMMEGIMME

Thursday, January 19, 2006 7:16:00 PM  
Blogger Dryad said...

this is really good!

Thursday, January 19, 2006 8:28:00 PM  
Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

Twef nigh?
like it's because you did it in fowlers class right? weren't you the person that was a girl in disguise as a guy or something?
oooh. brain cramp.

Friday, January 20, 2006 6:29:00 PM  
Blogger Dryad said...

hehehe

Saturday, January 21, 2006 12:33:00 PM  
Blogger Dryad said...

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!!!!!

Saturday, January 21, 2006 12:33:00 PM  
Blogger Ruthie said...

...I was viola.

and don't say a word, but I just noticed that the untamed shrew refers to the taming of the shrew....I told you to shut up.

Saturday, January 21, 2006 1:19:00 PM  
Blogger Kick-butt soccer star said...

OH MY GOD! you JUST noticed that!


shutting up!

*ruthie must have a major brain cramp from all that special chocolate ahem-hem-hem*

Saturday, January 21, 2006 11:14:00 PM  
Blogger fiddlin' fool said...

Sabriel by Garth Nix? arn't there two more books after it?

Tuesday, January 24, 2006 11:25:00 AM  
Blogger Nature's Daughter said...

yes

Tuesday, January 24, 2006 1:38:00 PM  
Blogger Esperanza Rising said...

oh wow, this is amazing beyond words my sna"k"ey woman

i have fallen in love with it.

Thursday, February 02, 2006 10:04:00 PM  

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