Wednesday, October 26

yay

What
Hell
On?
/
If
Someone...
/
Treated
Hell
In
Selfish
/
Guise
Under
Yours
?
If
/
They
Have
In
Near
Killings
/
It
/
Looks
In
Knife
Effogies
/
Humbly
If
Murder
/
Anounces
/
Lottery
Officials
Time
!
Then
Hell
Ends
/
Calm
Orderly
Order
Like
/

Things
Hindering
Imunity
Near
God
/
If
Songs
/
Take
Half
Among
Tears
/

Hate
Exhists
/
Like
Irreverent
Knives

Extinguishing
Souls
/
Murder
Enthralls
/
Torn
Orange!
On guard!!!!!!
!
!
!

(Can you find the hidden message?? haha)

8 Comments:

Blogger Dryad said...

say that again?

Wednesday, October 26, 2005 3:20:00 PM  
Blogger Nature's Daughter said...

lol, i was really confused at first!! but now i've got it! and it is cool!!!

Wednesday, October 26, 2005 7:45:00 PM  
Blogger tay said...

i got it! yay!

Wednesday, October 26, 2005 9:32:00 PM  
Blogger fiddlin' fool said...

I got it!!!!!!!!!!!

Friday, October 28, 2005 1:02:00 PM  
Blogger fiddlin' fool said...

yay!

Friday, October 28, 2005 1:02:00 PM  
Blogger fiddlin' fool said...

your probably mad i told mia your story.......i would be......but i only told her the bare facts.....so that you could tell her the rest....but looking back it really was your story......and i feel bad for telling her so i wanted to apologize. but I NEVER CALLED HIM BRAD!!!!! THAT WAS A FIGMENT OF HER IMAGINATION!!!!!

Friday, October 28, 2005 1:06:00 PM  
Blogger Polenta said...

Gray Bean,

That's fine! I told her the story anyway and it worked out well! And I can understand carritts making things up or holusanating!!! haha, well, that's okay anyway and I would have probobly told what you told to my sister!

To everyone else. Yeah, I like those poems which are bi-directional. I do it a lot! Some of my past poems have been like that but I really wanted people to get this one so I hinted that there was something extra to it!!!

[coagulatedknees]

Friday, October 28, 2005 8:55:00 PM  
Blogger Esperanza Rising said...

lols! I got it! but she really did call him brad.

Friday, November 04, 2005 3:26:00 PM  

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